the game is really atmospheric and delightfully unsettling. the art style is nice, and the game is good at hooking you in; i am so fucking curious on what the hell is going on with nick, and i definitely plan on playing it once it's fully released!! the only complaints i have are some grammar issues, and even then, it's not too bad. if you ever make any other projects in the future, imma check them out in a heartbeat.
Thank you so much for the walkthrough! This is very nice! I'm hoping to fix at least some of the issues by the time game comes out, and maybe in the future find someone to help me with it! I'll definitely watch your video later!♡
Unfortunately, making the game longer is out of my hands (and not in my plans, this is my first project I'm just learning on it!) Please, if you see grammatical issues, write them in the comments! Unfortunately I'm not a native speaker and the whole game is literally done through a translator...
It gave me a lot of shock, I can't describe its art to me in words at the moment, so charming, so attractive, so scared but can't let me stop! The end3 CG made me watch it over and over again, and it was amazing! I like the conversation with Nick very much. What he gives me is not only a little fear, but also a temptation to run into his trap unconsciously. How do you do it, Nick, who is so charming and so intimidating to me?! damo alone is amazing and I'm really curious to see the full version. Honestly, I really can't wait!!
Why is this game so good?!!! I honestly love Nick.
I love how he acts, eats us, and talks about us. (It makes me feel nice) I love the music and the way the game made me think of things I would rather not mention and if or how things like this could/may happen. (I'm just interested in Yandere and Killers and how much pain people can tolerate. I've never tried anything though) I can't wait for the full game. And once again lots of love.
Thank you so much!! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that people like Nick, because I literally didn't know what he was supposed to be and his character came out with everything little by little
This VN hooked me .... Now I often began to invent and draw different outcomes if I met Nick in real life.)
I look forward to continuing! Greetings from Russia!)
Также напишу комментарий на русском.
Эта новелла меня зацепила.... Теперь я часто сижу и придумываю разные исходы, если бы я встретила Ника в реальной жизни. На английском я слов не смогла подобрать, но Никуся просто няшка! Люблю его всем сердцем)))))!!!!!!
Ahh it's very cute! I'm glad you liked my VN! You can always send me your arts on Twitter or here, I will be happy to share it! (If you don't mind!) ♡♡
I would like to send you a couple of arts and one small comic, but I don’t know how to use Twitter, it was blocked in Russia (
Do you have another social network like tumblr or something?
Я хотела бы отправить вам пару рисунков и один небольшой комикс (вот прям малюсинький), но Твиттер у нас заблокировали с прошлого года и им невозможно пользоваться(
У вас есть другая соцсеть по типу Тумблера или чего-то подобного?
this is one of the few VNs that really made me lean away from my seat due to disgust-- not the bad kind but the good kind, i really liked the demo, nick certainly left a big impression that creeped me out :" ) this one is really good, i would loooove to see more of this game :DD
I never thought that I would be glad that a person was disgusted by what I did! Hehe, nice to hear it! Nick is supposed to be a disgustingly weird funny psycho and I hope I managed to show him like this!
Unfortunately, you hit it right on the spot! I really intended this project to be something more (I had a long storyline and a longer relationship with Nick in my plans) but after all I came to the conclusion that if I made my first project THAT big, I wouldn't be able to finish it (Plus I needed the basic experience to understand how novels work)
So I removed 90% of the plot and just left Nick. A crazy guy who is addicted to the MC and wants to eat them up. Doesn't make much sense, just my fanaticism for the Hannibal series.
Thank you so much for your comment! Critique like this really help me! As soon as I finish all the endings, I'll start rewriting the intro part you saw in the DEMO right away.
WOW, I'M SHAKING REALLY HARD! IN A GOOD WAY!! God, I really want to watch this video, thank you so much for paying attention to my game! I hope to learn from the comments what I should change in the game. Thank you again!! ♡
The game itself was a little bit too edgy for my taste and i also can't say that i really liked the MC because they are also a bit too edgy and in my opinion a too big of a douche to my liking. But in some ways that gives off a charm. Since always kind and nice MCs are (subjectively/in my opinion) boring and not really realistic(to some extent)
Oh and i can't load just save
I hope you don't mind that i was a little critical with expressing my opinion of the game. If yes i apologize i want to show a different perspective (if i have one) and i don't intend to discourage people ^^
Also i never expect that people really need to change something since it's a subjective opinion after all ^^
That's okay, thank you very much for the critique! It was very important for me to hear it. I was planning to rewrite the MC and dialogues a bit, because I'm not completely satisfied with them either, but I wasn't sure if others think the same way.
There shouldn't be a download function, it's fine. I just couldn't remove the save function for some reason, either...
oh my gosh! I believe it was said already, but THE ATMOSPHERE! Also love Nick's character~ (the way you wrote him) Good joob! Waiting patiently for the updates :>
Thank you so much! No matter how many times people say it, I still get excited every time! (And I'm very pleased that someone other than me and my friend liked a weirdo like Nick hahha)
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the game is really atmospheric and delightfully unsettling. the art style is nice, and the game is good at hooking you in; i am so fucking curious on what the hell is going on with nick, and i definitely plan on playing it once it's fully released!! the only complaints i have are some grammar issues, and even then, it's not too bad. if you ever make any other projects in the future, imma check them out in a heartbeat.
Thank you so much for the walkthrough! This is very nice! I'm hoping to fix at least some of the issues by the time game comes out, and maybe in the future find someone to help me with it! I'll definitely watch your video later!♡
i wish you luck on finding the help you want!! making a game is hard, so it'd definitely be helpful to share the burden with someone else T-T
Unfortunately, making the game longer is out of my hands (and not in my plans, this is my first project I'm just learning on it!) Please, if you see grammatical issues, write them in the comments! Unfortunately I'm not a native speaker and the whole game is literally done through a translator...
It gave me a lot of shock, I can't describe its art to me in words at the moment, so charming, so attractive, so scared but can't let me stop! The end3 CG made me watch it over and over again, and it was amazing! I like the conversation with Nick very much. What he gives me is not only a little fear, but also a temptation to run into his trap unconsciously. How do you do it, Nick, who is so charming and so intimidating to me?! damo alone is amazing and I'm really curious to see the full version. Honestly, I really can't wait!!
Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm really incredibly glad you like Nick (because he really likes you too. V E R Y much) Haha! ♡
I'm also curious about why MC needs to wear a necklace, is there any special use for it?
In the novel every choice = a new ending, so the full version will reveal a completely different route!
This game took an unexpected turn.
OH GOD THIS SPRITE HHAHA!! Thank you so much for your video, you have a wonderful voice!! Good luck to you!
Cannot wait for more of this!!! Really good characterization and atmosphere! <3
Thanks! I'll try to do the full ver only better!
Why is this game so good?!!! I honestly love Nick.
I love how he acts,
eats us,and talks about us. (It makes me feel nice) I love the music and the way the game made me think of things I would rather not mention and if or how things like this could/may happen. (I'm just interested in Yandere and Killersand how much pain people can tolerate.I've never tried anything though) I can't wait for the full game. And once again lots of love.Thank you so much!! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that people like Nick, because I literally didn't know what he was supposed to be and his character came out with everything little by little
No problem! I must say. I love how twisted your mind is. (In a good way) To create such a likable character. Knowing how crazy they are, takes talent.
music is 10/10 game is is 10/10 gj fam 👍
Thank you!! ♡
This VN hooked me .... Now I often began to invent and draw different outcomes if I met Nick in real life.)
I look forward to continuing! Greetings from Russia!)
Также напишу комментарий на русском.
Эта новелла меня зацепила.... Теперь я часто сижу и придумываю разные исходы, если бы я встретила Ника в реальной жизни. На английском я слов не смогла подобрать, но Никуся просто няшка! Люблю его всем сердцем)))))!!!!!!
Приветик из России!!!)))
Ahh it's very cute! I'm glad you liked my VN! You can always send me your arts on Twitter or here, I will be happy to share it! (If you don't mind!) ♡♡
I would like to send you a couple of arts and one small comic, but I don’t know how to use Twitter, it was blocked in Russia (
Do you have another social network like tumblr or something?
Я хотела бы отправить вам пару рисунков и один небольшой комикс (вот прям малюсинький), но Твиттер у нас заблокировали с прошлого года и им невозможно пользоваться(
У вас есть другая соцсеть по типу Тумблера или чего-то подобного?
Honestly, I never used a Tumbler in my life for all my years... You can write me in Telegram!
No problem)
Damn, it was visceral *-* I loved it :D 🍽️
I watched your video even before this comment! Thank you very much again! Good luck to your channel! ♡
wow really? Thank you so much!! And good luck for you too for the continuation of your visual novel. I'll wait for your update :D
this is one of the few VNs that really made me lean away from my seat due to disgust-- not the bad kind but the good kind, i really liked the demo, nick certainly left a big impression that creeped me out :" ) this one is really good, i would loooove to see more of this game :DD
I never thought that I would be glad that a person was disgusted by what I did! Hehe, nice to hear it! Nick is supposed to be a disgustingly weird funny psycho and I hope I managed to show him like this!
this was so good!!! for such a short game it was very pleasant and scary!!
I'm very happy! I think the full walkthrough version will take about an hour!
This is amazing
Thank you!!
do you have the main background song on spotify or sum...its so good it got me shaking my ass and everything ong
Unfortunately, this uncomplicated music was made by an AI and edited a bit by me, so I haven't posted it anywhere!
Unfortunately, you hit it right on the spot! I really intended this project to be something more (I had a long storyline and a longer relationship with Nick in my plans) but after all I came to the conclusion that if I made my first project THAT big, I wouldn't be able to finish it (Plus I needed the basic experience to understand how novels work)
So I removed 90% of the plot and just left Nick. A crazy guy who is addicted to the MC and wants to eat them up. Doesn't make much sense, just my fanaticism for the Hannibal series.
Thank you so much for your comment! Critique like this really help me! As soon as I finish all the endings, I'll start rewriting the intro part you saw in the DEMO right away.
🤍GREAT START!🖤
Can't wait for the full release <33WOW, I'M SHAKING REALLY HARD! IN A GOOD WAY!! God, I really want to watch this video, thank you so much for paying attention to my game! I hope to learn from the comments what I should change in the game. Thank you again!! ♡
nick is such a cutie i love him
I'm sure he loves you VERY much too!
I liked Nick and the art style.
The game itself was a little bit too edgy for my taste and i also can't say that i really liked the MC because they are also a bit too edgy and in my opinion a too big of a douche to my liking. But in some ways that gives off a charm. Since always kind and nice MCs are (subjectively/in my opinion) boring and not really realistic(to some extent)
Oh and i can't load just save
I hope you don't mind that i was a little critical with expressing my opinion of the game. If yes i apologize i want to show a different perspective (if i have one) and i don't intend to discourage people ^^
Also i never expect that people really need to change something since it's a subjective opinion after all ^^
Take care!
That's okay, thank you very much for the critique! It was very important for me to hear it. I was planning to rewrite the MC and dialogues a bit, because I'm not completely satisfied with them either, but I wasn't sure if others think the same way.
There shouldn't be a download function, it's fine. I just couldn't remove the save function for some reason, either...
Thank you so much again!
oh my gosh! I believe it was said already, but THE ATMOSPHERE! Also love Nick's character~ (the way you wrote him) Good joob! Waiting patiently for the updates :>
Thank you so much! No matter how many times people say it, I still get excited every time! (And I'm very pleased that someone other than me and my friend liked a weirdo like Nick hahha)
It was a fantastic atmosphere! Can't wait for the full release
Thank you! I'll definitely try to maintain this atmosphere in another routes
ooh i love the Atmosphere of this alreadyyyy-
nick gives me the creeps and i love it ^^
I think I even went a little overboard on this one hahah! Trying to make him a little bit more mannered and suave in other routes.
Thanks so much for the feedback!!
a lil overboard xd - happens happens
still great tho
idk what ya are planning but i do hope we get to know more about em
TO BE HONEST I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING HAHAH! But I hope my improvisation will get better and better every time! Thanks for the support!