Unfortunately, you hit it right on the spot! I really intended this project to be something more (I had a long storyline and a longer relationship with Nick in my plans) but after all I came to the conclusion that if I made my first project THAT big, I wouldn't be able to finish it (Plus I needed the basic experience to understand how novels work)
So I removed 90% of the plot and just left Nick. A crazy guy who is addicted to the MC and wants to eat them up. Doesn't make much sense, just my fanaticism for the Hannibal series.
Thank you so much for your comment! Critique like this really help me! As soon as I finish all the endings, I'll start rewriting the intro part you saw in the DEMO right away.
WOW, I'M SHAKING REALLY HARD! IN A GOOD WAY!! God, I really want to watch this video, thank you so much for paying attention to my game! I hope to learn from the comments what I should change in the game. Thank you again!! β‘
The game itself was a little bit too edgy for my taste and i also can't say that i really liked the MC because they are also a bit too edgy and in my opinion a too big of a douche to my liking. But in some ways that gives off a charm. Since always kind and nice MCs are (subjectively/in my opinion) boring and not really realistic(to some extent)
Oh and i can't load just save
I hope you don't mind that i was a little critical with expressing my opinion of the game. If yes i apologize i want to show a different perspective (if i have one) and i don't intend to discourage people ^^
Also i never expect that people really need to change something since it's a subjective opinion after all ^^
That's okay, thank you very much for the critique! It was very important for me to hear it. I was planning to rewrite the MC and dialogues a bit, because I'm not completely satisfied with them either, but I wasn't sure if others think the same way.
There shouldn't be a download function, it's fine. I just couldn't remove the save function for some reason, either...
oh my gosh! I believe it was said already, but THE ATMOSPHERE! Also love Nick's character~ (the way you wrote him) Good joob! Waiting patiently for the updates :>
Thank you so much! No matter how many times people say it, I still get excited every time! (And I'm very pleased that someone other than me and my friend liked a weirdo like Nick hahha)
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do you have the main background song on spotify or sum...its so good it got me shaking my ass and everything ong
Unfortunately, this uncomplicated music was made by an AI and edited a bit by me, so I haven't posted it anywhere!
Unfortunately, you hit it right on the spot! I really intended this project to be something more (I had a long storyline and a longer relationship with Nick in my plans) but after all I came to the conclusion that if I made my first project THAT big, I wouldn't be able to finish it (Plus I needed the basic experience to understand how novels work)
So I removed 90% of the plot and just left Nick. A crazy guy who is addicted to the MC and wants to eat them up. Doesn't make much sense, just my fanaticism for the Hannibal series.
Thank you so much for your comment! Critique like this really help me! As soon as I finish all the endings, I'll start rewriting the intro part you saw in the DEMO right away.
π€GREAT START!π€
Can't wait for the full release <33WOW, I'M SHAKING REALLY HARD! IN A GOOD WAY!! God, I really want to watch this video, thank you so much for paying attention to my game! I hope to learn from the comments what I should change in the game. Thank you again!! β‘
nick is such a cutie i love him
I'm sure he loves you VERY much too!
I liked Nick and the art style.
The game itself was a little bit too edgy for my taste and i also can't say that i really liked the MC because they are also a bit too edgy and in my opinion a too big of a douche to my liking. But in some ways that gives off a charm. Since always kind and nice MCs are (subjectively/in my opinion) boring and not really realistic(to some extent)
Oh and i can't load just save
I hope you don't mind that i was a little critical with expressing my opinion of the game. If yes i apologize i want to show a different perspective (if i have one) and i don't intend to discourage people ^^
Also i never expect that people really need to change something since it's a subjective opinion after all ^^
Take care!
That's okay, thank you very much for the critique! It was very important for me to hear it. I was planning to rewrite the MC and dialogues a bit, because I'm not completely satisfied with them either, but I wasn't sure if others think the same way.
There shouldn't be a download function, it's fine. I just couldn't remove the save function for some reason, either...
Thank you so much again!
oh my gosh! I believe it was said already, but THE ATMOSPHERE! Also love Nick's character~ (the way you wrote him) Good joob! Waiting patiently for the updates :>
Thank you so much! No matter how many times people say it, I still get excited every time! (And I'm very pleased that someone other than me and my friend liked a weirdo like Nick hahha)
It was a fantastic atmosphere! Can't wait for the full release
Thank you! I'll definitely try to maintain this atmosphere in another routes
ooh i love the Atmosphere of this alreadyyyy-
nick gives me the creeps and i love it ^^
I think I even went a little overboard on this one hahah! Trying to make him a little bit more mannered and suave in other routes.
Thanks so much for the feedback!!
a lil overboard xd - happens happens
still great tho
idk what ya are planning but i do hope we get to know more about em
TO BE HONEST I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING HAHAH! But I hope my improvisation will get better and better every time! Thanks for the support!